October 20th

Kill Zone

Hjels, December 4th, 2016, 11:54 pm
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- I hate exposition dumps, but some times they're neccessary. This page is actually two pages turned into one, because I wanted the story to move along a bit, so we can finally get to the main event.


Average Rating: 5.00

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Delta-v, December 5th, 2016, 9:20 am
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- As info-dumps go, this was relatively painless.

I really like the change of focus between Panels 3 and 4. I find it very effective. :)

GroovyKinda, December 5th, 2016, 11:51 am
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- I really liked this page. Info dump? Yeah, but it was done in such a great way that I enjoyed it. That cinematic change in focus on panels 3 & 4 was a great way to show those two, and what's going on with them.
And panel 6. Man. Cat's grimace with Shield's words. Brutal.

Andy P. (Guest), December 5th, 2016, 2:46 pm
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- This didn't feel like an info dump. You planned your page planning plan well. Well planned.

This got me thinking, at what point does human technology allow us to become the hunters and the ancient monsters to become the "villagers beset by evil creatures"?

They're gonna need a bigger gun.

NitztheBloody, December 5th, 2016, 11:53 pm
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- Shields looks especially badass in all his gear, even just sitting around giving his collaborators their "briefing".

melaredblu, December 6th, 2016, 12:28 am
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- Holy cow, that second to last panel. Is that some of Cat's fighting spirit returning I see there? Please let it be so!

Hjels, December 6th, 2016, 6:13 pm
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- @Delta-v: It's an attempt at a subtle (?) visual clue to Cat's feelings towards Rai rhight now. When the focus is on him, she's out of focus. When it's on her, he's out of focus. When they share a panel, she's pulling away from him. Forgiveness may not be on the cards, let's say.

Hjels, December 6th, 2016, 6:15 pm
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- @GroovyKinda: She's not always sublte when she's expressing her feelings. The little snarl on panel seven is her telling us how she feels about this whole messed up affair.

Hjels, December 6th, 2016, 6:17 pm
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- @Andy P.: Funny you should bring that up. We know that this has been going on for a long time. Beyond the 11 years Cat and Rai have been stuck in this nightmare. What has Shields gone through before that. What other solutions has he tried, before arriving at this approach. Who else has he involved.

We shall delve into this face first come chapter 3.

Hjels, December 6th, 2016, 6:20 pm
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- @NitztheBloody: He may be a substance over style kinda guy, but he knows how to dress for the occasion. He knows the value of theatricality and intimidation. He needs to exude authority and calm right now, to convince Cat and Rai he's got the situation in hand. Whether he does or not.

Hjels, December 6th, 2016, 6:21 pm
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- @melaredblu: She's got alot of anger in her right now. Whether she can channel it into fighting spirit or not, is anyone's guess. We can only hope.

Jessie (Guest), December 6th, 2016, 7:16 pm
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- I wouldn't call it an info dump. That's narrative. One of the many things I've admired about your comic is that the narrative caters to long form story with down time that gives us a look at character development, the world, and behind the scenes mechanics. I think Info Dump, while legitimate, has been turned into a buzz phrase that is used to often by those with short attention spans. Now that that is over... great looking page! I think panel 7 is the foreshadowing money shot. She has a plan.

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