October 20th

Persistent Bastard

Hjels, 22 May 2016 12:31 pm
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- Guess there is no such thing as a clean break. The curse may have let go, but she's firmly held back by her past. The road she's on is sure to have a good ending, right?


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GroovyKinda, 22 May 2016 02:02 pm
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- Yeah. It's all monkeys and cupcakes from here on out.
C'mon, Baltimore, you're only human. You messed up. Make it up by being a better parent and person.
I mean, c'mon. It's not like that's one of those "easier said than done" things.

Delta-v, 22 May 2016 07:51 pm
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- "Broken promise"--betrayal.

Interesting comparison between Baltimore and Rai. The betrayals were eerily similar except for the outcome (no thanks to Rai), and the guilt and remorse is overwhelming for both, but I have a suspicion that Baltimore is more deeply introspective, and more likely to be badly affected than Rai is. I could see him regretting his actions, but not being as demon-ridden about it as Baltimore is.

The one piece of information we don't have yet is whether Clemence was trying to kill Baltimore at the same time, which would make the outcome more like self-defense, and alter somewhat the validity of Baltimore's self-loathing.

My respect for you as a cunning storyteller is growing with each page. ^^

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